All Comments on 'Lady in Red Pt. 03 Ch. 01'

What a bold change of tack. Congratulations.

And welcome back.

...you are back with this amazing story... and what a loud "BANG"!!!

A great beginning for Book 3. Thank you so much for a great chapter. Easily worth 5 stars.

Good to see it move on, I suspect we all look forward to the next installments. I hope they will not be long in coming.

Thanks for another great chapter in this amazing story!

Love the new chapter, as always.

Thanks again for sharing on Lit, for free!

A grateful longtime fan.

C

Damnit harddaysknight. It was so good that I immediately wanted more. I know I'll sound like a fanboy but is there another chapter? If so release it soon. Godamnit that was good. Keep writing this incredible project.

Awesome as all ways. Only problem is now I have to wait for the next chapter.

There should be a voting option for adding bonus stars

HDK, you cannot know how much joy reading about these fabulous characters brings to my heart! This was a great start to a new series. Please, keep on with your creativity! Many thanks for your storytelling.

We waited a long time between chapters but this is a great addition to the story

The king of novels is alive and well, showing us why he is the king. The greatest series in the history of Literotica just keeps rolling with another remarkable chapter. HDK, you continue to amaze me with your ability to keep this fresh, make me love these characters and your amazing writing skills. You're the man. Look forward to the next chapter. It will be hard to top this one, but I'm sure you'll manage. You're still my guy. Randi.

Talk about hitting the ground running. Nice to see the hiatus didn't hurt your creative juices HDK. Looking forward to another funfilled thrilling ride.

Love the start, BUT why the big jump in years, and are you going to have chapter or 2 to recap?

So glad this story is back.

Good to see you're back at it, thank you.

So glad that you are continuing this story, I reread it a month ago with hopes that you would continue

Welcome back.

Great first chapter of the story. It was nice to see it picked up after Gwen was out of school. Also nice to see that The Lady Red company is going world wide. That way family members can still be in the story whenever you want to write them in.

Now I know people in Disney World on the Potomic are empty headed, but how can people that are in office or been in the country for the last twenty years not remember what Steve and the family did world wide over the past years.

Remember, Congress tried to get her out of office when she was elected the first time and Steve took the fight to them and she won.

Congress is going to in for a fight.

Now have to wait for the next chapter of this great story.

No surprise here to see another best of the best from HDK!!! Again, I am waiting with "bated breath" for Pt. 03 Ch.02.

One hell of a good start to book three. You made my day when I saw this was posted. Excellent writing as always

i loved the way you really Spanked the United States inept, corrupt, self serving, vested interest Legislature.

however , it was disappointing that you Beefed up the importance of the UK , France & Germany .. Everyone knows Germany has no real military forces & that the UK & France effectively do whatever the USA tells them to , wether in regards to NATO or the United Nations ...

essentialy America says jump & Britain & France yell "how high"

(that is once they have taken thier Tongues out of USA's anus & got up off of thier Knees)

One thing i would love Gwen to Address / deal with rapidly is the Economic War the West has been engaged in with China since the End of the Vietnam War ,

You know ... the one where we Export Jobs & Import Goods .. in the Forlorn hope that if we create enough Wealth within the Top of chinese society (and other parts of south east asia) and also a large enough middle class there ... that they will also Adopt our Democracy or have it forced upon them by an unhappy populace

The economic War that has totaly Fucked Main street & only made Wall street & the Elite more wealthy & more powerful

50 million Americans living in poverty & a rapidly shrinking middle class

Wake Up World .. Free Trade with Nations that have a much lower per capita GDP is nothing more than Economic Aid ...in the misbeggoten hope that those places will Emulate us & Love us .. or at least do what the fuck we tell them too..

It would also be delightful & really funny if Gwen looked into where all the unaccounted for hundreds of Billions of dollars have gone.

the money that falls into the Black hole of the DOD & state..

the money used to destabilise & overthrow any fucker that won't do what we want or tell them too. if you are really intent on addressing World Peace , thats one rabbit hole that cannot be avoided

(although even the mighty & legendary Steve Hammer will struggle to stop the shit storm & assassination attempts that would follow from looking to hard in those directions)

godbless you .. on the continuation of your most enjoyable & delightfully sweet Carebear Tale .. if only 10% of your alternate world could actually be real

you have two doctors ?

(charlotte & Laura)

will we see one @ CDC

and the other at W.H.O

that would be so cool ...

would love to see Gwen shake up the United Nations & actually have that organisation live upto it's name .. rather than be the global fuck up that it is today .

lots of love & best wishes

please keep up the good work & fun

xxxhugsxxx

Should have quite while ahead!

Though I thought the opening was a little weak, the last dozen paragraphs made up for it.

TOK

The last bit with Gwen talking about Steve maintaining her honour and all seemed kinda heavy handed

Sheer amount of nepotism was astounding

Otherwise, freaking brilliant. Welcome back!!! Hope future chapters won't have long breaks in coming online

First, thanks for taking the time to continue your story.

Maybe it's me, while entertaining, it's missing that spark which usually fills the page in past episodes.

Possibly because the sequence of events feel a little more rushed.

More than likely, it's just me, so trust me when I say it was worth waiting.

One other point.

Reading the comments, I have to laugh at the Anonymous contributors where they can't spell a word correctly or form a sentence, and yet, they think they're gifted literary critics who are ashamed to be recognized...lol

They're not worth the notice except for a brief, very brief, chuckle before being forgotten.

Thanks Again

welcome back. thanks.........

once again another great chapter! but what happened to chip? can't wait til the next chapter!

HDK,

Might as well kick this book off with a bang and you sure did. I am having soooo much fun reading this and can't wait for more. Your first 2 books were great and I suspect this one will be every bit a good.

Thank you very much for sharing with us.

Very good start to the new series. I would've loved to read chapters on Steves and Jareds career success in the NFL. If some how later on in the series you decide to have a flashback to that part of their lives it would be gladly appreciated.

Now you have really jacked up our interest. Great stuff HDK. Long live HDK.

Lady in Red lives on! Can't wait for the next one!

I hope we don't have to wait too long like a month for the next part

Been checking almost daily for the Lady in Red's return.

Another great installment of the Lady in Red series, i think i speak for everyone when i state that we want more, en preferably soon.

keep the chapters coming.

It would be a much better real world if our politicians were Ike Steve and Gwen.

This story just keeps getting better and better...

To the 3ed story. Gimme MORE

After 8 years of the wimp it would be nice to have a president with balls! Even metaphorical ones!!!

HDK stated this will be the last book in the LIR series. I hope he will continue on with the other characters. At the end of the last book the gypsy said their son would be greater than the father. At 8 saint is already saving lives by diving into the pool to save a baby. I hope a new story is created so we can watch his achievments unfold.

Any update on ch2 ????

I keep coming back to this story because it is like comfort food, good for whatever ails you. I am very grateful to HDK to see it continued.

This wonderful series just keeps getting better the longer it goes.

I always have a chuckle when Steve sings the Sinatra song. Can't recall if he did in this chapter or the prior one. I recall that, and no way where or when it was, there have been reported increased incidences of violence and suicide when this song is done in public. Something about the drone of it and having heard it 1000s of times gets people's backs up.

Gwen reminds me so much of my wife; except for the looks, figure, ballsiness and her husband. Oh without the fame and money as well.

And all of God's children yelled AMEN at the top of their lungs.

Why did Tyler not attend the wedding on his own to let his girlfriend know he knew her game.?Stephanie would not leave her job,Steve,her family and friends to go to England,especially now they were all in government and she would be needed more than ever.James would have to go to America.Also England would have no forces in Europe so they have no position to return to.Finally the author is fixated with "little panties",does he get an erection every time he writes that?.

What a load of crap.The Prime Minister wouldn't send an envoy,he would either send the Foreign Secretary or the Minister of defence.Stephanie is going to London so all of a sudden Lady in Red is going European.Tyler hasn't been heard of since graduation,but he gets a wedding invention but doesn't turn up.He uses some limp excuse,as conveniently resigns his job,but is given the job of running Lady in Red.What qualifications and experience as he got?.As I said pure unadulterated crap.

It Is FICTION and is for reading enjoyment. That’s all, give the writer a break

If Jason heads FEMA,who looks after L in Red response team.?Like wise if Jeff Wilson heads up Veterans,who is running the action Doll fact our?.

You should be ashamed. How dare you call it out.

Wow, I was definitely not expecting that twist.