by Username_of_Sean
wow, I don't even know what to say here. Strange stuff. Like, "bath salts" level of strange!
Loved the idea and i know of someone who would suit the character of emily very well. Hope you write more and tell us what happens at the mall.
When you wrote this, were you high and watching Family Guy & Alice in Wonderland?
Bizarre.
It's giving me some good chuckles.
You brought me into the story from the title, had to know what butt cookies were. I liked your story, and that there wasn't unnecessary details. Only suggestion is that adding the name of the lady in the park was confusing, didn't add anything to the story.
Definitely crazy but that's why I liked it.
I liked the idea, but there wasn't enough information. Thought the cookies were on her butt, not in her butt. Idk. Confusing. Like I said though the idea was hot.
Nicely done! Love the concept of the licking the rest of the crumbs and stuffing the pine cone. Keep it up!