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Promising start
I love how this story starts and hope that hou have other chapters coming.
Nice
Very nice start. Looking forward to see where this goes.
Hold up
You're doing the same thing I see many authors here do. You just published three stories on quick succession. I REALLY cannot tell you how highly I recommend sticking with one for a while then if you get tired switching to one of the other two, there are so many users with only a handful of stories published and none finished. Working on multiple stories at once does not work well. Set a schedule for yourself, submit by days, get edited by days. I'm being a hard ass cuz I like this story I like where it's going. It was good, fun, and dirty and I want to see it go further. I'm gonna go read your other two now
Just a quick Response
Fast reply to anonymous commenter about slowing down: I'm a writer who has already posted many of these stories on HF and am well into a large amount of them. I just took my time posting them on Literotica; several of these stories (not this one) are commissions.
What is HF?
Hi,
Great 1st chapter.Looking forward to reading your other stories.What does HF stand for?
Thanks.
HF
Sorry couldn't edit my earlier comment to make it clearer: HF is a website called Hentai Foundry. Mostly for photos but stories get there too.
Charlemagne would be appalled, but...
I'm amused. You took the title of the story of a knight from the legends of Charlemagne and turned it and the titular character into a sell sword. Highly amusing. The story itself is told in a fashion that's a bit too perfunctory to actually be erotic, but it was certainly entertaining and comparing this Roland to the legendary Roland gave me a good chuckle. On the plus side, at least this Roland survives (so far).
I Don't want to blow my own horn... :P
But this is pretty good.
Doe's anyone else get that joke? :)
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