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by kaf10/21/16

Again!

There you go pretending to be a girl again. You do have issues. It is so obvious that this is a male writer.

"You should probably just loose the shorts all together"

Don't you know the difference between "loose" and "lose"? Different spelling; different pronunciation; different meaning.

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by Anonymous11/05/16

Group sex???

Well, yes, there was a group of people at the party, and some of them were having sex. But there was no depiction of sexual interaction except in dyads (separately), so "Gay Male" would seem to be a more descriptive category - to the extent that the "I" in the story don' seem to have a sex, just an ass.

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