All Comments on 'With Friends Like These...'

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ProcuressProcuressover 7 years ago
I'd read Chapter II

This is the first Erotic Horror story I've read. I enjoyed it more than I thought I would.

The ending makes me nervous--are the girls going to be tortured, and killed? Yuck, if that's the case.

Or, are the Beamers just going to ravish them beyond fair play?

I liked the content of your other story more, but this story obviously had far more tension in it.

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
Oh God!

One hand down my panties and the other over my mouth between downward scrolls x God, identified with this scenario as one of my darkest fantasies and have in my own mind what might happen and would do all and anything to please to save myself.

Need to read the next part as soon as possible, and onward if more, then will read it all at once before masturbating myself into dark heaven x x x

DarcyLansdowneDarcyLansdowneabout 7 years ago
Where's this going?

I agree - good if it is going to be risky consensual fun

bad if it is leading to torture etc.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 7 years ago
Solid effort...

Great flow and very few grammar error. I like the mystery that surrounds the Beemer couple. I'm thinking that we're going to see the three of them in a "house" type BDSM setting with the performing at a party? Either way, I await chapter 2

SueAnne443SueAnne443almost 7 years ago
write what you know...

This has strong potential

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