by Sage_of_the_Forlorn_Path
I have enjoyed this tale of good and evil. Your writing is superb. My hope for you is too continue with many more of these adventurous tale. Live long
It ended too abruptly for me and left some unanswered questions like did she regain all her powers? Did they have a child? Did he have anymore contact with the gods especially after the battle. I thought some sort of reward or gratitude for saving the world and the gods were in order, anyway for me this story is incomplete. Still overall I gave you ⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️
I loved it! You have a gift of setting - essential for the best stories. I saw the orchard, felt the fruits, smelled the rushing water. My heart jumped throughout the final battle, and I stayed up to finish Part 2 way past my bedtime.
Have you written a novel? Not a Literotica-style (this lacks the sex every page-style), but a long form story? I would like to read it.