All Comments on 'The Forest Nymph Pt. 02'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
Beautiful tale

I have enjoyed this tale of good and evil. Your writing is superb. My hope for you is too continue with many more of these adventurous tale. Live long

Kookaburra8Kookaburra8over 7 years ago
Good story but

It ended too abruptly for me and left some unanswered questions like did she regain all her powers? Did they have a child? Did he have anymore contact with the gods especially after the battle. I thought some sort of reward or gratitude for saving the world and the gods were in order, anyway for me this story is incomplete. Still overall I gave you ⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 6 years ago
So wonderful!

I loved it! You have a gift of setting - essential for the best stories. I saw the orchard, felt the fruits, smelled the rushing water. My heart jumped throughout the final battle, and I stayed up to finish Part 2 way past my bedtime.

Have you written a novel? Not a Literotica-style (this lacks the sex every page-style), but a long form story? I would like to read it.

Dreamdog519Dreamdog51910 months ago

I loved the story!

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