All Comments on 'Carrying On Ch. 02'

With Becky's parents (plus Winston) injected into the story line the options could go anywhere like hurricane predictions in the Atlantic during Summer and that's a very good thing for the talented mind spinning it all up.

I would think some subtle twists & turns will support/allow a plethora of continuation options that could bring us dear readers even more enjoyment of the reality of this cast of characters. In simpler terms, rock n roll with several mini story lines within the safety lines. LOL

BRAVO!!!

Andrew is such a sexy man, and so loving and considerate. I'd like to see Andrew with a dusting of chest hair for his masculine chest. Give all the ladies something to stare at and drool over. And if he DOES get permission to fuck Sam and or Lauren, let them enjoy all of him -- a hairy chest, abs, cock, balls, etc. Please don't let that spoil Andrew. He does love Becky most of all.

Great story, really liked the plot and Andrew and Becky being happy in love. She knows she has a real man and wants to keep him. I know my wife refuses to share me. Even with her sisters, not matter how urgent. I can make repairs, pick her sisters up, take them shopping, but, that is the extent of my kindness.

Yes, I flirt with her sisters and they openly flirt with me. That is the extent of any playing.

I hope you write a little more about Becky and Andrew. Maybe, Jeffrey getting his ass kicked and saved by Andrew. Thank you

Keep 'em coming!

First, love this series. Former Army so I can somewhat relate to the Marines side of things. The few things that are bothering me a bit:

1. The advice Andrew gives Sam sounds wrong for his character. He starts by telling her to try to Jumpstart her husband, which sounds good, but then offers to help her if he doesn't respond? He had always been a very faithful kind of guy so I would doubt that he would suggest that she cheat, even if he doesn't like Jeff that much.

2. Lauren and Ryan. I like that they are dealing with some kind of friction in their relationship, but again Becky sharing her man with her sister fits with how Becky is, but I would hope that Drew keeps to his opinion that he won't while she is still seeing Ryan.

Overall love the series and can't wait for more. Will message you with some suggestions for the story of you want.

Rnebular

The first few stories were really good but now your "romance" has gone way down hill. As a retired AF member I apaud your deployment scenarios. But now you're adding stupid scenarios just for the fuck-factor. Take the story back to a love scenario. Find a scenario he wins over the father in law and help fix his marriage not fuck his future mother in law. I complain of your story direction but still give you major credit to have the courage and imagination to put a story together

I love the story so far. I do think that Drew should avoid sex with his future mother in law. Being a friend or shoulder to cry on can sometimes be part of a in law relationship though. And Becky might be willing to share with her sister but it shouldn't be at the risk of a friendship, especially between brothers in arms. Ryan needs to decide what he wants with Becky's sister, if he wants to continue their relationship or not with Drew's involvement being based on that.