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"that sharp, high iron smell"
Another extremely strong piece.
Even if may not share the writer's viewpoint
you must be swept along and drawn into his views
when you read such passages as:
"and it is all so quaint, there is nothing
like old war photographs to make us
smile, because
the blood is dry and
no longer has that sharp, high iron smell, because
one does not disrobe at the river
to find bone shards
fecal matter, curly worms of
intestine"
Another solid "5" and a MUST READ" by this poet.
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