You're talent and command for the language, along with your evident love of reading for the sheer joy overwhelm me. You vividness of setting the scene is lovely. I do not have the words to commend yours, the only word that comes to mind is awesome. I very much enjoy your words. Thank you.
You're a wonderful storyteller. I love the humour and real life details in the beginning of your story - they were amusing and connected me to the lovers. ...and it was so tender and then would turn sensual and then passionate. I love the tequila ritual that gets them into the love making - just delightful!
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Good Work!
I love Larissa!
A journey of the mind and body.
You're talent and command for the language, along with your evident love of reading for the sheer joy overwhelm me. You vividness of setting the scene is lovely. I do not have the words to commend yours, the only word that comes to mind is awesome. I very much enjoy your words. Thank you.
lustful and seductive, loving and sensual
You're a wonderful storyteller. I love the humour and real life details in the beginning of your story - they were amusing and connected me to the lovers. ...and it was so tender and then would turn sensual and then passionate. I love the tequila ritual that gets them into the love making - just delightful!
hot baby
LOVED IT, GOT WET mmmmmmmm
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