I started reading this story on a whim. I like many others thought it would be about a man with money that used it to Dominate and or own sisters. I was so very surprised at what I read and couldn't stop until I had read all three chapters. And I can't wait for the rest. You are indeed a very talented writer and I will definitely read more of your work. Thanks for a very good read.
Spanker Sam
Truly great writing. Not filled with smut, which is refreshing. Just enough to get the juices flowing! Please, continue...
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Anonymous10/29/16
Had to see how this played out. Worse than I imagined
It wasn't like he revealed that he was married or a felon. He wanted to be a normal person with her for a while. If she didn't care about his money then why did his having it matter at all? The reason this is bullshit is that if he was very poor he would want to keep that from her too. For many of the very same reasons. Fall in love with the person, not their bank account. She's a bigot. Plain and simple. If she ACTUALLY loved him his bank account she never even enter into it. This is where I get off of this train ride.
English
great again
more, more,more and soon, soon, soon.
Gotta love the segway into the next chapter!
Oh yes. You are one talented writer! Just keep us hanging until the next chapter is published.
Oh so very good!
I started reading this story on a whim. I like many others thought it would be about a man with money that used it to Dominate and or own sisters. I was so very surprised at what I read and couldn't stop until I had read all three chapters. And I can't wait for the rest. You are indeed a very talented writer and I will definitely read more of your work. Thanks for a very good read.
Spanker Sam
Dang It! Good story
I love this story. I like your style but hate you leaving us hanging.....(kidding)
Now I'm gonna be clicking on Lit every hour until I see the next chapter..and the chapter after that...and next.. (you get the idea)
Great Story
One of the best I've ever read on lit.
Agree with all...
Truly great writing. Not filled with smut, which is refreshing. Just enough to get the juices flowing! Please, continue...
Had to see how this played out. Worse than I imagined
It wasn't like he revealed that he was married or a felon. He wanted to be a normal person with her for a while. If she didn't care about his money then why did his having it matter at all? The reason this is bullshit is that if he was very poor he would want to keep that from her too. For many of the very same reasons. Fall in love with the person, not their bank account. She's a bigot. Plain and simple. If she ACTUALLY loved him his bank account she never even enter into it. This is where I get off of this train ride.
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