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by Anonymous

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by Anonymous10/24/16

Interesting

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by Anonymous10/25/16

Nothing happened. Nothing erotic. Not worth the time to read

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by gentleone5810/27/16

I don't get it

I don't get it. Who had the keys to the mud room and came in. The ending is confusing. It is not really erotic either. It is just an arrangement which involves spanking. It says how they came to meet but there is no real background as to why she needs a spanking, other than she thinks her work will improve and the characters are not developed. I don't usually have as much criticism as I have not submitted anything here, but I just don't get it.

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