All Comments on 'Black Controlled Society Pt. 01'

very nice and has it should be, want to read more.

I've had similar thoughts as this and started several time to write something along these lines. There does seem to be a move in this direction, at least in the United States, and it's long over due. I've seen numerous reparation stories and even websites. It's pretty obvious tat Black men, if only given the same privilege as whites, would be the superior race. Breed white women with Black men -- that's how it should be.

I can't wait to read the next part. And I love it that the 't' in tommie is lower case. A great touch.

I've love to see the mother described more, perhaps tommie has a habit of watching the Black men fuck her. Also, how are white men kept from fucking white women? I presume there is a law preventing that except in procreation.

Is Gracie selected for Black breeding? I know any Black man can probably fuck her, but maybe she's ideal for breeding.

Good work.

I've always shown respect to black men, they deserve it and we should all grateful when we are permitted to worship and please their beautiful and delicious black cocks.

The superior race? I think a better case can be made that Asians are the superior race.

You switched from third person point of view to first person mid-way. I liked when you wrote about "tommie" not me or my or I. I hope you change it back. Stories in third person are rare but so much better

most racist thing I have ever read on this site.

My favorite part of the first couple chapters is the final few paragraphs of chapter one. Especially the second to last sentence. Anxiously awaiting more.

Perhaps tommie gets to clean up Mother....

So what happened to everyone else? Only black and white? If it has been al least 39 years since the took over like it says. Why are they allowing whites to be married? How are they still having white children if they are all sleeping with black men. Integrated and mixed schools are the same.

asians make up 60% of the world population (including indians) and yet no one gives a fuck about them..

There are 4 billion asians on earth. Why don't you make something based on Asians??? Black is myth.

what a wonderful future

amazing world building!