by mindventure
I hope there will be a Chapter 2 very soon. Well done -- five stars and a huge 'thank you'.
Loved it! I am dying to see what the next weekend getaway holds for Lisa and Brett. I hope it is as sexy and stimulating as this one.
This could be fantasy, this could very well have been real. Either way it is one of the best stories I have read on Literotica!
Up to your usual standards. Can't wait for Chapter 2. Five stars for this one.
Excellent job. Loved the rewrite. I still have a copy of the earlier version and I see how you added them hashing out what happened and leaving us hoping for another installment. Would love to see that. I have always said that your stories all have a true note of originality in them and take off in directions that I never expect. Thank you.
Don't know how I missed this one. Very Hot! Off to read the next chapter. Five * for this one.