All Comments on 'Following the Rules Ch. 01'

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FASfanFASfanover 7 years ago
A marvellous story!

I hope there will be a Chapter 2 very soon. Well done -- five stars and a huge 'thank you'.

whatshername86whatshername86over 7 years ago
Very Arousing!

Loved it! I am dying to see what the next weekend getaway holds for Lisa and Brett. I hope it is as sexy and stimulating as this one.

WatcherRobWatcherRobover 7 years ago
Fantastic story

This could be fantasy, this could very well have been real. Either way it is one of the best stories I have read on Literotica!

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
Great story!

Up to your usual standards. Can't wait for Chapter 2. Five stars for this one.

clive_iluvnycclive_iluvnycover 7 years ago
Hot and arousing

Excellent job. Loved the rewrite. I still have a copy of the earlier version and I see how you added them hashing out what happened and leaving us hoping for another installment. Would love to see that. I have always said that your stories all have a true note of originality in them and take off in directions that I never expect. Thank you.

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
Love your work!

Don't know how I missed this one. Very Hot! Off to read the next chapter. Five * for this one.

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
Well Done!

I love stories with a twist!

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