Excellent job. Loved the rewrite. I still have a copy of the earlier version and I see how you added them hashing out what happened and leaving us hoping for another installment. Would love to see that. I have always said that your stories all have a true note of originality in them and take off in directions that I never expect. Thank you.
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Anonymous11/23/16
Love your work!
Don't know how I missed this one. Very Hot! Off to read the next chapter. Five * for this one.
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A marvellous story!
I hope there will be a Chapter 2 very soon. Well done -- five stars and a huge 'thank you'.
Very Arousing!
Loved it! I am dying to see what the next weekend getaway holds for Lisa and Brett. I hope it is as sexy and stimulating as this one.
Fantastic story
This could be fantasy, this could very well have been real. Either way it is one of the best stories I have read on Literotica!
Great story!
Up to your usual standards. Can't wait for Chapter 2. Five stars for this one.
Hot and arousing
Excellent job. Loved the rewrite. I still have a copy of the earlier version and I see how you added them hashing out what happened and leaving us hoping for another installment. Would love to see that. I have always said that your stories all have a true note of originality in them and take off in directions that I never expect. Thank you.
Love your work!
Don't know how I missed this one. Very Hot! Off to read the next chapter. Five * for this one.
Well Done!
I love stories with a twist!
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