Good work, Miss Kay. I bet you're just as good in person ;-)
by
Anonymous05/30/04
Keep writing!
Excellent work, most erotic and well written especially for your first piece. Please continue the story, my g/f and I enjoyed it tremendously. Congrats
great premise, very sweet. but let your inhibitions go.. flesh the story out some, use more vivid detail. for instance, you started with gina being in the teacher's control, or spell.. run with that. Also, Gina's first time and control.. tease the girl, make her very hot, wanting, begging. you may think of a follow up story.. another detention, or dinner later, that sort of thing. all in all, nice piece, you can tell it was written by a sweet girl who also wants to shed inhibitions. collaborate, my username is an aol name
by
Anonymous05/30/04
All we need now is a nun!
Great story all we need now is a nun
by
Anonymous04/08/06
more
would like to see this chapter fleshed out some and a chapter 2 added -- good stuff
by
Anonymous04/29/06
More!
You can't stop now. Come on girl you have a talent, use it!
English
You naughty teacher!
Good work, Miss Kay. I bet you're just as good in person ;-)
Keep writing!
Excellent work, most erotic and well written especially for your first piece. Please continue the story, my g/f and I enjoyed it tremendously. Congrats
more
great premise, very sweet. but let your inhibitions go.. flesh the story out some, use more vivid detail. for instance, you started with gina being in the teacher's control, or spell.. run with that. Also, Gina's first time and control.. tease the girl, make her very hot, wanting, begging. you may think of a follow up story.. another detention, or dinner later, that sort of thing. all in all, nice piece, you can tell it was written by a sweet girl who also wants to shed inhibitions. collaborate, my username is an aol name
All we need now is a nun!
Great story all we need now is a nun
more
would like to see this chapter fleshed out some and a chapter 2 added -- good stuff
More!
You can't stop now. Come on girl you have a talent, use it!
Click here to leave your own comment on this submission! or
Back to Substitute Seduction or
More submissions by LustfulKitten.