That First Night Ch. 10

The best (so far)!

Screw the sex, this is what makes the story great - the raw emotions and love no matter the odds. I laughed a lot more than I expected to and just loved how she got the guts to propose despite the social norms and doubts from the family. Her POV gave the whole story a special feel and made it so much more than just a love story between cousins. Though I bet he would have done it if her father wasn't a murdered by heart :)

5* and now I really can't wait for the next chapter to see how this glorious plan comes to fruition.

Prefer it from the guys point of view

Title says all

Can't wait for the next chapter, well done.

This is such an amazing story

I've binge read every chapter in 2 days, and I've got to tell you, I'm hooked, I urge you not to stop writing please, i guarantee you won't run out of an audience, and to comment on this chapter in particular, I had no problem with it not having any sex in it, I feel like those of us reading are mostly interested in this relationship that has sprouted between Andrew and Ashley, I think that incorporating more diologue with regards to how they feel about each other would make it that extra step better (you've done an amazing job, but perhaps having a scene where they just cuddle and talk about each other, have Andrew go on a romantic rant saying all sorts of beautiful yet sensual things to Ashley etc.) Idk, I just love your work, just do what you and pls DONT STOP lol

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So can we see the girl

Fantastic story

Ignore all the negative and petty comments.

This story series is one of my favourites.

Great work , keep it up.
This could be a huge series!

Ohhh more please

Just loving this series and hope you keep going

I can't understand why, but.......

....... my eyes have suddenly started to leak after reading this..

Very odd !