by ItGirl
Wow, very hot. I think you've been looking through my blinds!
I loved the protagonist's view of her body, her real and actual life, and her sad but sweet neediness. The porn was a nice way to draw in a "hot" scene of wild action without losing the realness; it contrasted nicely with the central character's not at all hot life. It's the little things ... the vibes hidden up past the Mop 'n' Glo - that really make this work. Loved it!
The Mother of All Masturbation stories, with excellent details (type of vibrator, etc.) that draw the reader in and won't let him go. Rings true, and is HIGHLY erotic! Bravo!