The story had potential but it seemed like you rushed or maybe didn't read your own story.
There's a reason why most of your stories haven't risen above 3.00
No,,,just no.
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The story had potential but it seemed like you rushed or maybe didn't read your own story.
There's a reason why most of your stories haven't risen above 3.00
No
No,,,just no.
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Back to Siblings or
More submissions by Ha275.