by SteveWallace
This has the chance of being as good as "The Circle"!!! Or better. We will anxiously await.
Obviously Elsa will become the wife and Cindy becomes the mistress or 2nd wife as polygamous marriages are illegal, but a wife and mistress living together with the husband isn't.
I just want to see how they get to that point in their relationship and how everyone reacts to that arrangement.
He is a fucking coward deserving of being dumped, but the fact that she has been cheating on him with her own sister since the start f their relationship is of no concern whatsoever?
We worship the ground you walk on, for example:
"I came up behind Mark and reached around his body. I removed the jacket to his tux, and then undid the bow tie, and the buttons to his starched shirt. I peeled that back too, baring his chest and enabling skin-to-skin contact with Cindy's bare breasts."
Poor Mark with the shit he's being put through. Let me get this straight while he's trying to apologize for hiding something as arbitrary as how much money he has this whole time Elsa was hiding that she was always intending to force Mark into a polyamorous relationship but he's the bad guy? WHAT THE FUCK IS WRONG WITH HER!!!!!! Obviously he's taking it well for obvious reasons but still! And don't anybody give me the excuse that she finally told him that's not the point she has been hiding this for 6 weeks and even got to the "I love you" stage with him but this whole time she was gonna force him to love her sister as a condition of being with her after having already formed a romantic relationship with him that is some psychotic manipulation right there, or this is a severe case of bad writing I'm sorry to say it. Her secret was far more relevant and important to their relationship then him hiding his wealth because you know... Her secret is literally that she's bring someone else into the relationship, that is really really fucked up!!! She should have told him on the 3rd date before it went anywhere. Fuck her! I hope Mark and Cindy hit it off though. But fix your shit SteveWallace at least have someone point it out or something and make her apologize, maybe have an arc where Mark gets to punish her back in some kinky way.
will continue reading some more but the threesome twist is okay. too bad I looked at further chapter titles as it seems to descend into a fantasy semi orgy situation
I gotta agree with other comments, while the premise is fun, it lacks any form of depth. Else is pretty garbage for what she did because "honesty" meanwhile she callously brags about her hypocrisy?
It makes little to no sense other than "hot girl is trash but is hot so ok"
Kinda killed the whole vibe for me to be honest.
Pretty crap story. Jumps around, really no depth built, poorly written. Not sure how there are 254378 chapters to this and anyone still reads it. I wanted to quit after chapter one and fought my way up to here. Well, no more! Just a waste of words. The author must have many bots (or moronic loyal readers) to keep rating the stories high. And that's it. I'm not wasting another moment of time on this story.