hiya.. a very nicely written story.. the right amount of build up too. WOuld have loved a bit more teasing ( older men seem to be such easy picks for those ) but this one is ripe with possibilities. Thanks a lot.
Could have done with more build up between the two, but was easy to read. Just not sure what the title means. What is she climbing?
I hope you add some more chapters. Thank you for writing
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hiya.. a very nicely written story.. the right amount of build up too. WOuld have loved a bit more teasing ( older men seem to be such easy picks for those ) but this one is ripe with possibilities. Thanks a lot.
nice read
Could have done with more build up between the two, but was easy to read. Just not sure what the title means. What is she climbing?
Good story
I hope you add some more chapters. Thank you for writing
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