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by ReefBeach10/26/16

Needs a spark

Sorry, this doesn't feel at all real to me.
I was interested at first - you a virgin overseas, Germany the Economic Miracle with a murky past, age difference, Olga a young woman at the end of the War, etc.
But the story turned into a 2016 porn checklist... a bit dull for me.
Make your characters more real, in their time, make them react to each other other than just the bump 'n' grind and your stories will be better.

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