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A loving mother
A nice view of how a mother should react when desired bi son
For a first attempt at writing, very nice job.
Yes, the sex was kind of rushed, but only because the characters had had time to ponder things over. It's difficult to believe a story in which a mom who had never had sexual thoughts for her son suddenly strips and fucks him. The measured reaction you described seemed more believable, and provided an opportunity for her to consider what to do. My advice: keep things believable, or at least in the realm of "possible". Also, stay away from "foot long cocks" and "GG breasts" (unless you're writing a cartoon or a parody). Looking forward to your next project, whether it's a new story or a continuation of this one.
outstanding for first try
This was an excellent story and like others have said kind of rushed but, there is great potetial in further chapters being written for this! I look forward to reading even more!
Nice story
Quite a few mom's have discovered son's saved stories or porn history. Often the knowledge is used to tease and arouse son. Many opportunities and reactions are possible.
Good but too short
Needs some background and buildup. Also what's the father situation? Looking forward to the sequel.
Love mothers
Very erotic and naughty story, enjoyed reading it but short
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