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Not a bad ending
I love a good love story the build up was great I am not sure I read the 1st part but that's fine I really liked the way her mum point out that we all change when we get older which is true and I am glad she finally saw that in all not a bad story
Absolutely wonderful.
I went back to read chapter one to refamiliarize myself with this story. I loved chapter one and I loved this chapter as well. I love stories where people start off as friends and gradually evolves into love. I myself rekindled an old flame with a lovely girlfriend I had back in the mid nineties. Circumstances tore us apart but we ended up getting back in touch with each other and life has been beautiful again for the past three years. Thank you for sharing this wonderful little series. Well deserved five stars.
the Garden
Sometimes conventions work just the way they are supposed to. When the narrator ( I just realized that I did not recall seeing the name!) when the narrator walks back into the garden, my heart did the flutter and my eyes got misty, one knows what will happen and the happening is all the sweeter . . .
Thank you.
Nice chapter
Think u tied it up pretty well.sequel?
Thanks
Great sequel. Thanks.
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