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great premise but...
the sex part was awfully rushed...
"Jerry then puts his whole mouth over my dick. He gives me a great blowjob. He nicely squeezes my balls. It feels amazing. His tongue glides over my dick and I cant stop looking at him in the act.
I moan and moan and after a few short minutes, I burst in his mouth. Jerry swallows the whole load. He gets off of his knees and I stand up."
10 seconds worth of sex is a little too fast for me...maybe you need a little more detail to the actual sex part of your story...
Good Start
Amplify the sex act it self more but nice start, continue the story line.
da.cd@frontier.com
So hot,.
Loved the story. About like me, I was a lil younger, A nieghborhad me suck him, after catching me wearing moms cloths,. Those were some hot years of suckin and getting fucked by a few older men,. Oh to be young again./
herfun101@yahoo.com / love to chat
VERY NICE
I think it should have been longer. However I can understand you coming fast your first time. Please continue this story, I am sure there is a lot more to tell.
Could have been longer.
It was a god story; but it could have been much longer. For instance, over time, Jerry could have taught him more and more.
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