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:)
I have heard that creature roar lol
despite
typos (aweful and rumbleing) and reversed syntax (even though it I can't see) it's rather charming and would make a cute children's poem. Actually, I read it to mine. :)
Excellent
Good god YDD get a life and try to learn from this mans poems they are better than anything you have produced perhaps thats why you critic cause you can't write.
Art sweetie, you just keep right on writing and don't let these pencil necks bother you honey these are damn good and bring a smile to many. :)
hungry?
I enjoyed it
pencil neck
fan club
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Classic typos from the pen of Art. What clinches it is that reverse syntax Eve noted.
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