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Many...
...sharp images. No wasting of words or emotion. A fine effort.
Thoughtful...
reflections of sadness and if only. "It was painted on you", this line knocks me out...nicely done.
~Merry
Damn... a powerful poem
the tragic outcome painted so vividly in your words, and the guilt, sharp as a blade, is painful. A ton of emotion in these few words... very well done.
jim : )
Very moving
The grief of inaction is often far more sorrowful than the fear of supposed consequences. Nicely written. Thank you.
I remain,
Thesandman
I cannot
say much more than was said below, I am impressed greatly by this writer. These lines in the context are very telling.
Words are worthless
I?m sorry
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