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by Anonymous

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by tennesseered12/27/16

Gave it a four...

A really nice little vignette with an unusual (for Lit.) twist at the end. Approach and avoidance, as it were. But the writing is sound, the dialogue is good, and the plot seems believable. This could be part of a larger story. Where does it go from here?

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by nudestjoe01/27/17

Nuts!

You really had me going... The end was shocking and deflating (if you catch my drift...).

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by asadwa43a4476rtatya02/03/17

1*

Another illiterate WHORE posting cuck shit.

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