All Comments on 'Weave'

as natural as sunlight through leaves creates a lovely image in your poem. This makes a nice companion piece to Tristesse's Weave. There is a shifting, kaleidoscope quality to the way a writer attempts to create meaning for a reader, and your poem captures this well. Thank you. :)

into the written word. A kalidescope of sparkling lines... very good.

jim : )

pictures from well woven words. I like this one a lot.

I like to tell people that cause I often wonder if any of mine come up as spinner picks.

is this a triolet? its good, I dont know about the meter requirements, but I did see a couple of "extra" words ( ie, in the line that contains *all a'tumble" I would drop the "all") that interrupt the flow, jee, I hate that word,flow, but you know what I mean, I hope..enjoyed the read :)

when I looked at some other things you had written. I really like the picture you created, reminds me of stain glass windows too. Very nice.