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I like how you filled in some of the back story. I look forward to the other chapters. Thanks.
Thanks Ender
I rewatched the film a couple of time in preparation for this story, trying to find vague mentions in the dialogue that I could expand upon. The Irving Boys and how the Millennium Falcon ended up with Plutt is a prime example. You'll find some more of those in chapter 2 and 3 as well. Thanks for your readership!
auguy86
I love the idea for the story and it was extremely well written.
Please continue to do more!
Excellent
As you know, I am both a Star Wars fan and liked your original series. Looking forward to the next chapters.
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