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Nicely written
A well written story, grammar, spelling etc all good, characters' names consistent, but just not a cock-hardener. Thanks for submitting it, though.
Good story, but ...
Use punctuation as you would speak. Otherwise, I quite agree; there's nothing like giving a blow job in a vehicle!
Hot sex, could use better proofreading
This author is a good writer but I have commented before on another of his stories that he needs to give more attention to the requirements of good, skillful writing. For example, I noticed wrong verb tenses and missing words. He seems to be in too much of a hurry to craft his sentences according to the best writing standards. Nevertheless, the content provides the kind of story I like best -- good, vivid description of cocksucking, which is for me the best, if not the only, kind of man-to-man sex.
VERY VERY NICE
WE need more.
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