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by gordo1211/01/16

You have no relationships and are a loner

But up pops your "Daughter's" boyfriend.

Where does the daughter come from?

Blew it on the first paragraph I didn't bother going further 1*

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by Anonymous11/01/16

If you changed Tim into a triceratops, you could definitely sell it on Amazon.

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by Anonymous11/06/16

Nice idea

It seems like English isn't your first language. Phrasing seems a bit awkward.

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