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Thoughts at first sight
A fairly new voice gives us images in short sharp phrases.
The final rhyme ties up the poem with a twist and greatly enhances it.
Keep writing like this.
Not tongue-tied
It's so nice to see a new poet reveal his/her style. Nice imagery and a hint of alliteration. Good one!
Not tongue-tied
It's so nice to see a new poet reveal his/her style. Nice imagery and a hint of alliteration. Good one!
Nice!
You did a great job with this poem. Thanks for sharing.
I loved the staccato footsteps...
this one had a distinct rhythm that danced. Well done.
jim : )
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Poetry in motion
Setting any man's heart to over-beating and heating.
Neat...
short and sweet.
THE KINETIC FORM
is motion of the sounds. TK U MLJ LV NV
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