All Comments on 'Body in motion'

A fairly new voice gives us images in short sharp phrases.

The final rhyme ties up the poem with a twist and greatly enhances it.

Keep writing like this.

It's so nice to see a new poet reveal his/her style. Nice imagery and a hint of alliteration. Good one!

It's so nice to see a new poet reveal his/her style. Nice imagery and a hint of alliteration. Good one!

You did a great job with this poem. Thanks for sharing.

this one had a distinct rhythm that danced. Well done.

jim : )

Poetry in motion

Setting any man's heart to over-beating and heating.

short and sweet.

is motion of the sounds. TK U MLJ LV NV