by tungtied2u
A fairly new voice gives us images in short sharp phrases.
The final rhyme ties up the poem with a twist and greatly enhances it.
Keep writing like this.
It's so nice to see a new poet reveal his/her style. Nice imagery and a hint of alliteration. Good one!
It's so nice to see a new poet reveal his/her style. Nice imagery and a hint of alliteration. Good one!
this one had a distinct rhythm that danced. Well done.
jim : )