Surrogate Mother-in-Law becomes Wife

That was hard to follow and read

confusing and poorly written. Seriously needs an editor.

ANNY

No body made you read the story,Its free,

Long!

Repeatedly talking about treatments, dining and dancing, becoming closer. Could have reduced the total story by a third. Obviously didn't proof read before submitting.

Grammar

I feel that the writer could do with some courses in the English language, it was like reading shorthand.

poor writing

Why keep repeating the same thing over and over again?

Look, you wrote a story, its fine, as one other reader wrote, no one is forced to read it. My mother in law agreed to do the same for us but it didn't work. We all had a talk about it and agreed to stop the treatments. However my wife and her mother came up with the idea that since her mother was still ovulating maybe, but only if I agreed, we could have sex and try the natural way. My wife was persistent, so we agreed to a meeting. Gloria, her mother, sat as my wife talked. In the end I asked Gloria was she sure, no she wasn't but it seemed the only chance left for the same gene pool. Gloria then asked me, I said, I am reluctant, no offense to you and I appreciate your help but I would say no. My wife cried, our last chance, she said if it was an anonymous younger person you would. I thought to myself, maybe, but this was my mother in law. You are being selfish, now I was the awful person. We went home, she didn't talk to me and I felt bad. I got a phone call next day from Gloria ,please meet me at Sids café, we need to talk. I told my wife, good, listen to her. Well, Gloria had dressed, stunning,tight knee length skirt, nylons, nice blouse, hair done, high heels.. I greeted her, I told her she looked nice, she held me and said, nice enough to fuck, the first time I had heard her swear. My cock responded, I answered, well they think so as I saw 3 guys at a table looking at her. I didn't ask them, I asked you. We had coffee and a small snack. To cut a long conversation short, she said my last chance, after today, no more offers,for her daughter, for your wife, you have both said you want children, short of adopting, try this once. Do you not find me attractive enough, hell no, I mean yes, I mean that is not the issue, what is then, well your my mother in law, yes, but your wife, my daughter is ok with this. If the mother in law thing is the issue, then think of me as your hot secretary who is willing to do anything for you and I mean anything as her hand grabbed mine and put it on her knee, spreading her legs, come on take me home and fuck me. I stood up, ok, enough, she stood, my place then. I have to ring my wife, she took the phone from me, after, not before, you would not tell her about your hot secretary. We drove, her hand moved my hand to under her skirt, to her pussy, no panties, warm, damp, that's it finger me, she got wetter as I got harder. We were there, she got out of my car, come on as we walked up one flight of stairs, pulling her skirt up so I got a good view of her sexy ass.. she dragged me into her bedroom,, undressing as I undressed, then knelt on the bed, her pussy and ass presented to me, come on give it to me and I pushed my hard cock deep into her wet pussy and it wasn't long before I blew my cum into her before still hard collapsing on top of her. She didn't say anything but I felt and heard her sobbing, so I moved away., laying next to her. I put my arm on her back, you ok, I felt bad, she faced me, yes, I think so, thank you, no thank you I am sorry I put you and my wife through this torment. that's ok, I wasn't sure either, I was especially not sure how I would feel, but I am glad we did it., to tell the truth I enjoyed it. Her hand went to my cock slowly stroking me, I am at my most fertile for the next 5 days, I think it would be wise if we did the same in 2 days, then 2 days later just to give it the best possible chance, you ok with that, your wife is. Sure, I will leave it up to you two. Good boy as she moved down, her mouth over my cock, then straddled me, lets not leave anything to chance and I delivered my second load of the day and she sat on me until I shrank out of her. now go home and tell your wife what has happened. I did, she was overjoyed. Yes, I did follow the program, 2 days, then 2 days. Honestly I looked forward to it, then the wait, yes she did get pregnant, we had a girl. No I did not have sex with my mother in law again, I wanted too but it never happened. the thing that happened though was that I hired an older secretary who doesn't mind being bent over my desk her skirt high up over her hips as I fuck her.