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by Anonymous

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by YDD05/25/04

My strings

This is a good day for simple things expanded.
A pleasant write on the marionette metaphor of life
using crisp phrasing that creates effective imagery.

Who is pulling the strings?
The choices are several and intriguing.

Well worth reading.

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by tarablackwood2205/25/04

Very much...

...enjoyed this, Dream. Thank you.

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