All Comments on 'Laylah Yearning Pt. 03: End'

Very imaginitive and thrilling! A great story! My only critique would be the identical scene here between Laylah and Sulilly from Akkad Burns when they are becoming Ardat-lili. It makes sense, but a more tailored experience for each would have been amaxing! Thank you for your stories regardless.

Thanks! Yes, I agree there is some lack of originality in that regard. Akkad Burns is kind of an origin story (kinda) for the Ardat-Lili universe. So I guess it is sort of inevitable.