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by Syndra Lynn05/25/04

A Titanic

achievement in poetry. Very nice, Kunda.

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by YDD05/25/04

Last Call

Nicely said,
an interesting angle of view.

Thank you for sharing.

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by jthserra05/26/04

A historical allusion

adds a flair (or is that flare) at the end. A nice twising ending that was there all along.

jim : )

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