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by Anonymous

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by ender2k2k11/02/16

Well written, but it feels like the prologue to a story.

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by Anonymous11/28/16

Anonymous above me

Just letting you know your story was good, and the critic is a cunt.

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by Anonymous12/30/16

Ok

Ill tell you this good story but im disapointed that thier is no sequel

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