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by jthserra05/26/04

The movement of your words

on the screen add a dimension to this poem. I'll need to read this several more times before I quit scratching my head, but it's a puzzle worth puzzling. Well done.


jim : )

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by LeBroz12/12/07

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This poem was mentioned in the Archival Review thread, in a picking through Lit's archive of over 38,000 poems.



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