Billionaire and the Sisters Ch. 08

great again

but too short.

And this is where the story devolves into crap if this is only going to continue down this road. I have no desire to keep reading. This chapter although necessary for character development wasnt where I hoped youd take this already. You were better off going the andy route. I really have no desire for a bunch of random dudes that come and go with each new chapter that becomes another bukkake gangbang which ultimately always happens when authors add more and more guys to a story. Why wasnt cindy included in the talk about other men regardless of the dancing? Your focus on the two main characters needs to include cindy in the decision making process besides just letting elsa talk for her. She isnt needed as a third main voice but should be included with the other two. Otherwise shes not an equal partner. I hope the next chapter we see some backtracking with how gun ho you make mark. Unless youre planning to make him bisexual too so to gloss over everything thats already occurred. Mark just accepting another mans cum in his mouth after very little time with multiple partners is quite a stretch. When you start out with mark apprehensive and take the jumps without more caution towards or from his girlfriends its a bit much.

It seems to be the Trend to delve into "polyamorous" relationships.

That is alright but I am always concerned about safe sex and STD

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First, I thought S.L.U.T. stood for Sexually Liberated, Unapologetic and Truthful.

Second, I hope to see some spit roasting and double penetration before you ship Tom off to his hotel, along with a reveal that Mark Worth is Mark Worthington. Of course an entrepreneur should know who an American billionaire and super star businessperson like Mark Worthington would be as his face would have been on the covers of all sorts of business magazines like Fortune and Forbes. Tom may have even done research on Mark's background as a model for his own business career as an entrepreneur.

Anal?

So Cindy and Tom do anal and then he puts his cock in Elsa's pussy? Yuck! Not cool.