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Jane the Jungle Queen Ch. 01

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by Anonymous

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by gordo1211/03/16

Sorry

This is just terrible. 1*

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by Anonymous11/04/16

Needs work

You need to find yourself a good editor who can fix all of the mistakes you made in your story

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by Anonymous11/06/16

Not terrible

While it is too early to guess where exactly you are heading with this Story, the scenario looks interesting. Yes, the text could use some proofreading, occasionally there is a word missing and such, but it is not full of errors like the other commenters implied. Please continue

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