by jessica_tang_vonharper
You are so good at creating new mind blowing situations. Take a bow.
Meliprija, its effects, its culture, the eroticism. so well depicted. salute to a mistress of high quality erotica. Jessica ..simply brilliant
The story was very well written, and I love how you slowly build Sara to this free-minded and adventurous woman. I especially love the part in the lobby, how Sara was letting Adam enjoy her body, and how she was teasing Craig in the lobby line (I was even hoping she would prove her last statement to Craig). Awesome, just awesome!
Brilliant as usual ! It's such a wonderful surprise to find another episode of this story.
Some hot sex, but a bit more forced than some of your earlier stuff. For example, the car sex: she seemed to just jump right into it without even any assessment of how loud the engine was, Linda's range of vision, or even whether she felt right about fucking Adam as a person, I mean I kinda had the impression she didn't like him! And it seems like she went really quickly from still-a-bit-shy but burgeoning Dr Olsen to cheeky sex kitten in the space of one story. Feel like I skipped a chapter (but I definitely didn't). All meant constructively of course; you're still one of my very favourite authors <3
This story line has so much potential, please continue for 20 chapters.
I look forward to more episodes of this story. The hot sex great, but I'm hoping Sara starts skipping the clothing; after all, it's too hot to wear clothes.
I know from experience that these stories take time, refinement, and patience. You really are quite talented. I hope you continue to write. -elgemowtf
Thank you for another outstanding chapter. I hope Leon is understanding and encourages Sara to further experience the erotic culture. Maybe with Adam now gone and just the two women left, Linda might loosen up a bit and enjoy what's available in Meleprija.
So I had to kill 4 hours in the cold sitting in my car waiting for my kid to complete his SAT Test, and then I found your story on my phone. I just had to read all four parts. 4 hours seamed like 10 minutes, and I was ready to place my order at amazon for my own mapa bag !
You are an wonderful writer, I hope you turn this into a book and a movie.
Thank You, !
Sam
A brilliant story of exhibs. Please continue it! There is a lot of idea in this story what you don't use. For example: Linda must be an exhib women too, who will be catch up by Sara when she is totally nude in public.
Have enjoyed reading part 1 to 4 more than once. Eagerly waiting for part 5 of the story. You are an excellent writer
Wow I think this the best writing on Literotica.Thank you for sharing. John
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A beautiful story hopefully Jessica will find time to give us the gift us another chapter.
As well as being explosively sexy and exciting, this series also has one of the most interesting and unusual storylines I have found here on Literotica. Jessica, I congratulate you and hope you will continue writing further Beautiful Day chapters!
I enjoyed the story and the good writing, Too bad our society couldn't be a bit more like Meleprija.
It's clearly states To be continued... Please don't leave my hanging.
Just re-read this terrific series. Hope Jessica has some more chapters in the pipeline!
Loves this series, and am really looking forward to chapter 5. When is it being written..?
Have jus read this story from start to episode 5 and adored it. Please continue it is one of the best stories here.
I gave you 5*s all the way and placed you on my favourite authors list.
Thank you for making an old nudist happy.
I absolutely just loved these stories. Nice job with the character development, and world building on the island nation of Meleprija.
For those looking for the complete book (which is well worth the read) I urge you head to Amazon. "Meleprija: Beautiful Day" lists for $3.99 to buy, or if you have Kindle Unlimited it's free to borrow. Either way, it's well worth it.
https://www.amazon.com/gp/product/B07MP4Y2YJ/ref=dbs_a_def_rwt_hsch_vapi_tkin_p1_i2
Went from 5 to 0 when that manipulative prick Adam came back. Nobody should be coerced into doing anything. He is a useless user, the worst kind of human being. Story or not parasites should be eradicated.
Wonderful story, well written. Glad Sara finally had sex in public with a second person, hoping future chapters will have her fucking many more, not just Leon. And maybe even talking with passers-by as she fucks. I'll be buying the Amazon edition just to see!
2016 till now?
6 years later and... please could we have the next installment?
*sigh* yet another hundreds or even thousands of unfinished story that is actually an excellent read...
Thanks for a great story! I love the way she allows her passion to take her way over the edge into such new experiences. And her body and all those lovely cocks "with stone" are delightful! I am so pleased to see you are still writing and publishing on other stories. Wondering what will entice you back into this story? I was so looking forward to Leon coming back into the picture, and more expansion into the exotic world you have created here.
On the comments below about continuing - I just saw that there is an extended version on Amazon Kindle - have downloaded and looking forward to reading
... and reporting back after reading the extended version of this story on Amazon: it was definitely worth it! You are indeed a published author Jessica Tang von Harper and you do it well!
So relieved that Adam is finally gone. He just wanted Sara for her body, Leon actually cares about her!
Maybe Linda will be more relaxed at the guest cottage now that she got her groove on. Show a bit of skin. Get dirty.
I absolutely love your stories, and the quality of writing. I just bought the continuation of this and one other of your books off of Amazon