All Comments on 'A Beautiful Day Pt. 04'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
brilliant Jessica

You are so good at creating new mind blowing situations. Take a bow.

jarnurajarnuraover 7 years ago
What a wonderful series

Meliprija, its effects, its culture, the eroticism. so well depicted. salute to a mistress of high quality erotica. Jessica ..simply brilliant

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
Absolutely sexy, and mind-blowing

The story was very well written, and I love how you slowly build Sara to this free-minded and adventurous woman. I especially love the part in the lobby, how Sara was letting Adam enjoy her body, and how she was teasing Craig in the lobby line (I was even hoping she would prove her last statement to Craig). Awesome, just awesome!

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago

Brilliant as usual ! It's such a wonderful surprise to find another episode of this story.

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
Loved your story

Awesome story

Ring_on_it_Ring_on_it_over 7 years ago

Some hot sex, but a bit more forced than some of your earlier stuff. For example, the car sex: she seemed to just jump right into it without even any assessment of how loud the engine was, Linda's range of vision, or even whether she felt right about fucking Adam as a person, I mean I kinda had the impression she didn't like him! And it seems like she went really quickly from still-a-bit-shy but burgeoning Dr Olsen to cheeky sex kitten in the space of one story. Feel like I skipped a chapter (but I definitely didn't). All meant constructively of course; you're still one of my very favourite authors <3

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
Please continue your story

This story line has so much potential, please continue for 20 chapters.

lazy_readerlazy_readerover 7 years ago
Very hot!

I look forward to more episodes of this story. The hot sex great, but I'm hoping Sara starts skipping the clothing; after all, it's too hot to wear clothes.

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
Good work

I know from experience that these stories take time, refinement, and patience. You really are quite talented. I hope you continue to write. -elgemowtf

bike4twobike4twoover 7 years ago

Thank you for another outstanding chapter. I hope Leon is understanding and encourages Sara to further experience the erotic culture. Maybe with Adam now gone and just the two women left, Linda might loosen up a bit and enjoy what's available in Meleprija.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 7 years ago
I imagine this is how Gauguin lived his final years carrying his mapa bag around Bora Bora!!!!

So I had to kill 4 hours in the cold sitting in my car waiting for my kid to complete his SAT Test, and then I found your story on my phone. I just had to read all four parts. 4 hours seamed like 10 minutes, and I was ready to place my order at amazon for my own mapa bag !

You are an wonderful writer, I hope you turn this into a book and a movie.

Thank You, !

Sam

AnonymousAnonymousabout 7 years ago

Thanks. Really enjoying this series.

baldYfanbaldYfanalmost 7 years ago
Don't breake!

A brilliant story of exhibs. Please continue it! There is a lot of idea in this story what you don't use. For example: Linda must be an exhib women too, who will be catch up by Sara when she is totally nude in public.

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
When is part 5

Have enjoyed reading part 1 to 4 more than once. Eagerly waiting for part 5 of the story. You are an excellent writer

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
Instant erection

Have thoroughly enjoyed this series

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
best writing

Wow I think this the best writing on Literotica.Thank you for sharing. John

mctnguy66@yahoo.com

bike4twobike4twoover 6 years ago

A beautiful story hopefully Jessica will find time to give us the gift us another chapter.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 6 years ago
Constant erection, with added fascination

As well as being explosively sexy and exciting, this series also has one of the most interesting and unusual storylines I have found here on Literotica. Jessica, I congratulate you and hope you will continue writing further Beautiful Day chapters!

ontomars55ontomars55over 5 years ago
Great Story

I enjoyed the story and the good writing, Too bad our society couldn't be a bit more like Meleprija.

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
Please don't lie

It's clearly states To be continued... Please don't leave my hanging.

bike4twobike4twoabout 5 years ago

Just re-read this terrific series. Hope Jessica has some more chapters in the pipeline!

4nk84nk8almost 5 years ago
Chapter 5?

Loves this series, and am really looking forward to chapter 5. When is it being written..?

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 4 years ago

Egarly waiting for Chapter5

sober71sober71almost 4 years ago

Have jus read this story from start to episode 5 and adored it. Please continue it is one of the best stories here.

I gave you 5*s all the way and placed you on my favourite authors list.

Thank you for making an old nudist happy.

MattcpaMattcpaover 3 years ago
Loved it

I absolutely just loved these stories. Nice job with the character development, and world building on the island nation of Meleprija.

For those looking for the complete book (which is well worth the read) I urge you head to Amazon. "Meleprija: Beautiful Day" lists for $3.99 to buy, or if you have Kindle Unlimited it's free to borrow. Either way, it's well worth it.

https://www.amazon.com/gp/product/B07MP4Y2YJ/ref=dbs_a_def_rwt_hsch_vapi_tkin_p1_i2

naughtyandy4unaughtyandy4uover 2 years ago

Went from 5 to 0 when that manipulative prick Adam came back. Nobody should be coerced into doing anything. He is a useless user, the worst kind of human being. Story or not parasites should be eradicated.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

Wonderful story, well written. Glad Sara finally had sex in public with a second person, hoping future chapters will have her fucking many more, not just Leon. And maybe even talking with passers-by as she fucks. I'll be buying the Amazon edition just to see!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

Release chapter 5 plz. Its been ages.

EugeneSGEugeneSGalmost 2 years ago

2016 till now?

6 years later and... please could we have the next installment?

DevilbobyDevilbobyalmost 2 years ago

You say to be continued, but when.

EugeneSGEugeneSGalmost 2 years ago

*sigh* yet another hundreds or even thousands of unfinished story that is actually an excellent read...

RangeExpanderRangeExpanderalmost 2 years ago

Thanks for a great story! I love the way she allows her passion to take her way over the edge into such new experiences. And her body and all those lovely cocks "with stone" are delightful! I am so pleased to see you are still writing and publishing on other stories. Wondering what will entice you back into this story? I was so looking forward to Leon coming back into the picture, and more expansion into the exotic world you have created here.

RangeExpanderRangeExpanderalmost 2 years ago

On the comments below about continuing - I just saw that there is an extended version on Amazon Kindle - have downloaded and looking forward to reading

RangeExpanderRangeExpanderover 1 year ago

... and reporting back after reading the extended version of this story on Amazon: it was definitely worth it! You are indeed a published author Jessica Tang von Harper and you do it well!

crystalspringcrystalspringover 1 year ago

So relieved that Adam is finally gone. He just wanted Sara for her body, Leon actually cares about her!

Insanehippie69erInsanehippie69erover 1 year ago

Great story are you going to finish it.

IAmWatchingIAmWatching11 months ago

Maybe Linda will be more relaxed at the guest cottage now that she got her groove on. Show a bit of skin. Get dirty.

AnonymousAnonymous4 months ago

fantastic love to read more please keep up the great work xx

gromit1951gromit1951about 2 months ago

I absolutely love your stories, and the quality of writing. I just bought the continuation of this and one other of your books off of Amazon

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