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by Syndra Lynn05/26/04

Nice memories.

I liked this poem a lot, but felt cheated at the end. I wanted you to make a decision. Are they gone? Great phrases, though and it made me smile. Thanks for this.

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by Merrymaker05/26/04

I remember

This made me think of simple days with Bazooka gum, roller skates, and exploring -until the streetlights came on anyway lol Memories nicely done.
~Merry

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by bamagirl05/30/04

Great Memories

Thank You for the memories

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