All Comments on 'Frankly My Dear, I Don't Give a Damn'

This was a tasty tidbit. The lead-in conversation was just enough to lure me in, and what followed was erotic as well as believable. I'm not sure if you're still writing, given the dates of your submissions, but something like this could be explored further -- the great thing about the character dynamics as you've written them is that there are hints of so much more below the surface that remains untapped. Nice job -- and you even take the time to "frame" your story with the GWTW references.

was a great read, but the ending was too abrupt. write some more. would love to see what else he has in store for her.

Abosuletly Fucking Amazing. Theres no other way to desrcibe that. It got me wet, now I just wish my girlfriend was here lol.

legendary. will have to make my partner read this!!! thank you. just right.