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Nice Fantasy
Even though I absolutely hate this 2nd person/present tense style, I did enjoy that little fantasy!
As a describing fantasy...
I also hate the 2nd person/present tense style, except when someone describing a fantasy or a dream to the other person in it...It doesn't seem the case in here...
Got to agree
Person and tense poblems... this may be too difficult for novice writers to pull off.
this is a rare treat...
a 2nd-person scene I ca appreciate.
These are few and far between.
Kudos for pulling off this kinky little fantasy story.
4*
Very good.
I really enjoyed this one, you show a lot of promise and I look forward to reading more from you.
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