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by Anonymous

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by Anonymous11/07/16

You need an editor

You writing is at a very poor level. Wrong words, bad punctuation, and horrible sentence structure.

Please have someone that know English review your story before publishing your next one.

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by Anonymous11/08/16

Lol

This arrogant douche.. Says your spelling and punctuation is poor. And they couldn't even proof read there own comment.

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by C_frommn11/11/16

Agree w/ LOL

The story is fine could use an Editor. But do not let that keep you from Continuing the story.

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by CallMeBigMike6911/12/16

Your story is good and I did find a need for a Editor

I like your story and the only thing that bothered me was it was to short. It takes balls to put up a story. It take just being an asshole to leave nasty annonymous comments. Keep writing looking forward for yournext story.

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