All Comments on 'Hypnosis at Work'

You writing is at a very poor level. Wrong words, bad punctuation, and horrible sentence structure.

Please have someone that know English review your story before publishing your next one.

This arrogant douche.. Says your spelling and punctuation is poor. And they couldn't even proof read there own comment.

The story is fine could use an Editor. But do not let that keep you from Continuing the story.

I like your story and the only thing that bothered me was it was to short. It takes balls to put up a story. It take just being an asshole to leave nasty annonymous comments. Keep writing looking forward for yournext story.

Both people who commented on grammar made grammar mistakes themselves in their replies. The first said 'someone that know English' but it should be knows, and the second said there where their is the correct there/they're/their. I love when people are hypocrites. It's also pretty ironic, if you ask me.

I want someone to do this to me haha

Loved the story, hope it continues.