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by Anonymous

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by Syndra Lynn05/26/04

I'll admit

that I don't understand this. But I do like it. I like the way the words feel on my tongue. The final stanza is best and almost stands as a poem alone. Thanks for making me think!

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by echoes_s05/26/04

Thank you

"was you who" was this meant to be "was it you who"

I loved this. Well versed, well written, and excellently expressed.

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by LeBroz12/11/06

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Like a streaming melange from Star Trek to Oz.

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