All Comments on 'Dominant Species Ch. 34-36'

OMG that last line you just killed me keep up the good work love this story so much!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

I'm so glad the human vs. were crisis was averted, though with the unfortunate loss of Lisa and Richard (though considering he was the one who wanted to commit genocide, perhaps it was inevitable that he would die - of all things, while protecting his wife). I had wondered if Lisa would challenge Richard - because as his wife, Richard has respect for her - and as a mother, Lisa wouldn't want to see her family destroyed. If Reggie had challenged Richard, he might have died as his Dad is stronger - and would want to teach a lesson to his son (and the other wolves). But I thought Richard would be shocked if Lisa challenged him and might be willing to give up, for the good of his family. Luna made a good choice with Josi, and now, perhaps, the communities can live together in harmony. (Well, we still have to find out about Willow and Cheyenne.)

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Please tell me there will be more!

They all have a lot of work still to do to rebuild trust and start the new society in what is left of the world. The challenges ahead should be a good read. New lives for many to adjust. More to be found and perhaps saved. I'd imagine the new soon to be wolves / pack members have kin elsewhere they will want to find or save.

Thanks for the smile partwolf. I hope you continue to do well with your surgeries and look forward to reading more.

Most people wouldn't know that.

Thanks for the last line -- now keep 'em coming! :)

Last line was great. Love your stories. Keep them coming.

This a very well written story with an excellent story plot and excellent character development. I just finished reading chapters 34 thru 36 and can not wait to read the rest of the chapters as this is a very enjoyable story to read. I hope in the remaining chapters that you included the North Folk pack more in the story and what happens to the other 2 girls. Do they request to be changed? Your premeous of a mass solar flare is not beyond happening just as the very large volcanic bed under Yellowstone National Park exploning causing the ash generated to block out the sun, Keep the chapters coming till the story ends. Retired Army NCO

It was legit. Need to get some sleep, will read the rest tomorrow.

Dear lord she is a pistol! Literally laughing out loud! Great story and awesome humor

these stories make me binge them.

She’s been a werewolf for a day and she knows all the traditions down pat? Nah, sorry, great premise and good story up to that point, but you lost my support at the end.

Love it? Well, not, not my favourite genre - but it's 5 stars worthy anyway.

Some cut corners in my opinion. Like, as Purplefizz pointed out, Josi knowing all the stuff already; making the bond for a new pack member is credible, traditions concerning the dead is not.

Also the please add names instead of he/she every now and then, makes it clearer.

So Josie is really funny I get, and love, but how did she all of a sudden know everything about werewolves?