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Ashes of Camelot

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by fantac6311/08/16

More than an erotic tale.

There is a plethora of erotic stories on this site, many being mine, under my former nom de plume, fantac64. However, most are poorly written, including mine, so it is a pleasure to read a tale that reaches far beyond the erotic element to tell a story of love and acceptance. Wonderful characters and great emotion. Thank you.,

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by jenorma201211/08/16

pretty good

I did not think this was too long, and it was really good, I hope to hear more about this in future chapters, that happened a year after I was born

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by Anonymous11/08/16

What a wonderful story. Left me wanting more.

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by TSreader11/08/16

Very good!

A very good story indeed! Thank you!

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by QuietJohn01/05/17

Exceptional!

Well researched and beautifully painted

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by Maonaigh02/10/17

Beyond the erotic

There are many good to excellent stories on this site but few, if any, go beyond the erotic and look at the wider world picture as thoughtfully as your story has done. A more than worthwhile piece of work. Congratulations, Shaima!

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