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All Comments on 'Pierced by the Beauty'

by HeartofFire

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TathagataTathagataalmost 20 years ago
short

and beautiful

Just the right amount of words and description

nice work

Thank you

My Erotic TailMy Erotic Tailalmost 20 years ago
Precious Poem~

Very delightful and flowed well, excellent!

MerrymakerMerrymakeralmost 20 years ago
Elusive butterfly...

tough to find, but priceless when attained. You've blushed this out with a light touch...nicely done.

~Merry

jthserrajthserraalmost 20 years ago
A well focused metaphor

runs through the heart of this one, letting the image guide us as we read. Very good...

jim : )

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